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![]() Why Revising is Important to me | ![]() Painting EXTRAS....before the drafts | ![]() Eng 325: Essay 3, 1st Draft |
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![]() 1st Draft Revised-FINALThe font size changes, as well as the organization of the first paragraph. Some of the sentences are changed as well to add a direct structure to the opening paragraph. | ![]() 2nd Draft | ![]() 3rd Draft Revised-FINALThe drafting of this paragraph also changes with the sentence organization. The previous draft had sentences that could've flowed better in different paragraphs to circle the theme. |
![]() 4th DraftThese next 3 drafts are paragraphs that I switched around completely from different parts of the essay. These are in the order of the FINAL revised essay and don't talk about 'my relationships with my paintbrushes' until I've explained how I emerged myself in the art community first. These revisions are very important because they show my growth in instantly explaining to my audience the order of importance in my writing. | ![]() 4th Draft cont. | ![]() 4th Draft cont. |
![]() 4th Draft cont. | ![]() 4th Draft Revised- FINAL | ![]() 8th & FINAL DraftThis was a Final draft to this piece and ultimately changed my theme at the end of the piece. It shows how I used parts of my introduction to explain why Painting Is My Bag. |